Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Estefani's leads

Rhetorical question
Why must chocolate go through so much criticism? A student may have some of the answers.
Compare and contrast
There are two types of people, those who like chocolate and those that dislike it. The ones that do like it have lower blood pressure, while does that don’t suffer from a lack of cacao.
narrative
The cacao bean grown in many parts of South Africa is loved by many around the world. Chocolate is what motivates some and soothes others.

4 comments:

  1. First one is good bcuz it lets me want to read on

    Brian Chen

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  2. The first one catches the attention of the reader and pulls them in.

    --Bikramjit

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  3. First. They're very short. I guess that's fine, but they aren't really something that makes me want to go OOHHHH MUST READ! They make me want to go: Hmmm... Interesting... Let's see what the who article says.
    -Faith

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  4. their ok, but a little short
    -Gaby

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