Lead 1: (Twist) Most american diets have some kind of meat everyday, and people believe that so much meat is not good for your health and might be the reason for obesity. But vegetarians arent having a healthy diet as they think they are. There are many proteins that are only provided by meat and cannot be found in fruits and vegetables.
Lead 2: (Direct address) You have heard that vegetarianism is the best diet to follow but you have been learning from 2nd grade that meat is one of the requirements of the food pyramid. It is necessary for you to eat some kind of meat once a week for a better and healthy life.
Lead 3: (Rhetorical question) How is it possible that lack of meat is actually bad for a regular diet?
I like the Twist the best, but you might want to cut the first sentence down a little; it seems too long to me.
ReplyDelete-[Asian X]
First one is good, it gives details but maybe add some more stuff to draw the reader in.
ReplyDeleteBrian Chen
first lead good
ReplyDeleteSecond also good
Third lead not so good needs more WORK :P
The second and third leads need some work and the first one is the best so far....
ReplyDelete--Bikramjit