Narrative
A Mexican tamale maker is something common but a Honduran tamale maker is more ordinary. Combining the many taste of different foods gives the honduran tamales a unique taste.
Descriptive
Nice and delicious is what the Honduran tamale is, with all its ability to change a community and impact a city this food brings all the ingredients to the cooking scene.
Narrative
When you think of tamales you think of the ones from Mexico. But does anyone really think of Honduran Tamales? Just ask the loyal clients of Aida Canales a Honduran Tamale maker that originated in none other than the country of Honduras.
I think all of them clearly tells me what your feature story is going to be about, but the third one is the best because its more specific and more descriptive.
ReplyDelete-Brian
I think that the third one is the best because it tells what the feature is about and gives one exapmle
ReplyDelete--Bikramjit
My favorite is the second, because the first and last don't really make any sense. i always look at tamales as more of a Latin American thing, and not necessarily just a Mexican thing. I think the second lead sounds a lot better, and prevents creating that idea that all tamales are Mexican and Honduran. They were all well written though.
ReplyDeleteThe first is a statement, the second is plain. But the third is great.
ReplyDeleteI believe the best lead to be the narrative but if you described the Honduran tamale maker as "extraordinary", it'd be a more appealing lead.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you might want to consider breaking the last sentence of the narrative into two, because it's somewhat run-on.
youre narative leads should tell a bit more of a story but i really like youre descriptive lead
ReplyDelete-Gaby garza